Question

【题目】时间飞逝，自从我踏入初中，两年即将过去，在过去的一年多时间中我发生了巨大的变化，取得了很大的进步，请以“How I Have Changed”为题写一篇作文来见证自己的成长。

要点提示：

生活方面：更加独立，能自己解决许多问题......

学习方面：意识到学习的重要性......

与人交往方面：更善解人意，与父母，老师，同学的关系......

要求：书写规范，语法正确，语句通顺，结构完整，要点齐全，卷面整洁，80词左右。

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Answer 1

【答案】How time flies! It has been two years since I came to the middle school. Great changes have taken place in myself.

As for my appearance, I used to be thin, but now I am fatter. And I used to have long hair because I thought having long hair made me look cute, but now I have short hair in order to spend more time on my schoolwork.I can do something by myself. Also my personality has changed a lot, too. For example, I used to be quiet in the past. I didn’t use to answer questions in class, but now I talk actively both in class and after class. The schoolwork is getting heavier. It takes me much more time to study and I can hardly enjoy myself. I used to go to the concerts with my parents once a month, but now I don’t have the time for that. I realize it is important to work hard.Now I can get along well with others.I can understand my teachers, classmates and parents.

In a word, as time goes by, I’m not what I used to be.

【解析】这篇作文要求我们以How I have changed为题，写一写自己上初中以后两年来发生的变化。文章中主要应从以下几个方面进行介绍：首先是生活方面，其次是学习方面，最后是与人交往方面。题目中给出了大概的写作提纲，我们应以这个提纲为基础，再丰富其内容，组织语言，串联成文。通过分析可知，这篇短文应主要使用第一人称，时态要根据具体表达的需要，表示过去的时候用一般过去时态，叙述现在的时候用现在时态。所以要特别注意谓语动词形式的变化。写作时，应使用自己熟悉的句型和短语，多使用简单句，辅以复合句和并列句。句子之间增添过渡性的词语，使文章意思连贯，表达流畅。