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近几年,家长开车接送孩子上下学已经普遍,人们对此看法各异,有些人认为接送孩子上学安全,可以让孩子有更多的休息时间,而且父母可以更好地和孩子沟通,而另一些人认为这会造成交通堵塞(traffic jams),特别是高峰期(rush hours),而且这样的会使孩子更多地依赖父母。
请陈述这些观点,并表明自己的看法。
注意:1.语法正确,语意连贯,不要逐字翻译;
2.80词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
These years it’s common that parents drive their children to school and back home. Different people have different ideas about that.
One possible version:
These years it’s common that parents drive their children to school and back home. Different people have different ideas about that.
Some people think it’s good to drive their children to school. They think it’s safer to send the kids to school in their car. And children can also have more time to rest in the car or at home. Parents can communicate better with their kids. While others disagree. They think driving kids to school can cause traffic jams, especially in rush hours. Besides, it can make kids depend on parents too much. I think children should go to school by themselves. They can go on foot, by bike or by bus. It’s good for both their health and environment.
【解析】
试题分析:近几年,家长开车接送孩子上下学已经普遍,人们对此看法各异,有些人认为接送孩子上学安全,可以让孩子有更多的休息时间,而且父母可以更好地和孩子沟通,而另一些人认为这会造成交通堵塞(traffic jams),特别是高峰期(rush hours),而且这样的会使孩子更多地依赖父母。请陈述这些观点,并表明自己的看法。应该用第三人称,时态是一般现在时。写作前先根据给出的提纲,写出有关的短语和固定表达备用。最后串联起来。内容要点包括:朋友的名字、年龄、外貌特征、人品和能力等。
【亮点说明】 本文做到了包含所有内容要点,语句通顺,标点符号运用正确。在80词左右的篇幅中,恰当地运用了一些句式和短语,如it’s good to drive their children to school, While others disagree,depend on
考点:提纲作文。