Question

18．假如你叫魏华，3月8日妇女节那天，你为母亲做了很多有意义的事情．请你根据表格中所给信息，用英语写一篇日记．

上午	你用零花钱（pocket money）给妈妈买了一束（a bunch of）鲜花
下午	你去菜市场买菜，为家人做了一顿简单而可口的饭菜
晚饭后	你把自己亲手制作的贺卡送给妈妈，并祝她节日愉快，告诉她多保重身体…

注意：1）字数80-100字；
2）日记的开头和结尾已写好，不计入总次数；
3）日记需包括所有要点，可适当增加细节和适当发挥，使其通顺、连贯．
8^th March Saturday                                                    Cloudy
Today is Women's Day．I love my mother so much that I've done a lot of things for her．
In the morning I boughtmany flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase．In the afternoon I went to the market to buy vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family．After supper，I gave Mother the card that I made myself and said"Happy Women's Day"to her．Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork．I also promised to help her do some housework from today on．Hearing the words，Mother was moved to tears．
Today is a special day，warm and meaningful．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图表作文．内容是写一篇日记记录妇女节那天你为母亲做的很多有意义的事情．注意日记的格式．时态主要为一般过去时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．上午；你用零花钱给妈妈买了一束鲜花
2．下午；你去菜市场买菜，为家人做了一顿简单而可口的饭菜
3．晚饭后；你把自己亲手制作的贺卡送给妈妈，并祝她节日愉快，告诉她多保重身体

常用到的重点短语：
pocket money  零花钱
tell sb to do sth 告诉某人做某事
pay attention to 注意
promise to do sth 许诺做某事
【高分句型】
1．After supper，I gave Mother the card that I made myself and said"Happy Women's Day"to her．
that作为关系词的定语从句，that作为从句的宾语，修饰先行词card．
2．I also①promised to ②help her do some housework from today on．
①promise to do sth 许诺做某事
②help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
3．①Hearing the words，Mother②was moved to tears
①动名词短语做伴随状语．
②一般过去时的被动语态：was/were+过去分词．

解答 8^th March Saturday                                                    Cloudy
Today is Women's Day．I love Mother so much that I've done many things for her．
    In the morning I bought many flowers with pocket money and put them in the vase．（上午；你用零花钱给妈妈买了一束鲜花）In the afternoon I went to the market to buy vegetables and cooked a simple but delicious dinner for my family．（下午；你去菜市场买菜，为家人做了一顿简单而可口的饭菜）After supper，I gave and said"Happy Women's Day"to her【高分句型】．Then I told her to pay more attention to her health and not to overwork．（晚饭后；你把自己亲手制作的贺卡送给妈妈，并祝她节日愉快，告诉她多保重身体）I also promised to help her do some housework from today on．【高分句型】Hearing the words，Mother was moved to tears．【高分句型】
Today is a special day，warm and meaningful．

点评 这是一篇图表给出材料的作文，是一篇日记，应用文写作要注意格式，图表中给出的材料较为丰富，考生在写作时，图表内容必须包括在内，建议考生在平时的英语学习中积累一些常用到的重点句型和短语，出彩的发挥会给文章增色不少．