题目内容
书面表达(10分)
假如David是你的好朋友,请根据要点提示,以“My Friend David”为题写一篇短文。
注意:1. 要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯。
2. 词数80左右。
David | 14岁,和家人住在泰兴。 |
lifestyle | 有一个健康的生活方式,两餐之间从不吃甜食。 |
hobby | [经常去购物中心。认为那是一个会见朋友和娱乐的好地方。 喜欢穿白色衣服。认为白色和其他什么颜色都相配。 最喜欢春节,家人团聚,享用美餐,非常幸福。 |
plan | 想当一名设计师(designer),现在正在努力学习,希望梦想成真。 |
My Friend David
My friend David is 14 years old this year. _________________________________
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My dear friend---David
My dear friend David is 14 years old and lives in Taixing with his family. He has a healthy lifestyle,. For example,he never eats sweet food between two meals.
He often goes shopping in the shopping center because he thinks it is a good place to meet friends and have entertainments. White is his favourite colour, because he thinks that white goes with any other colour. His favourite festival is the Spring Festival because he can enjoy delicious food and get together with families and every feels happy.
He wants to be a designer and is working hard. He hopes his dream will come true.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇短文要求我们以My dearfriend --David为题写一篇作文,即David的情况给大家做一介绍。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲,主要包括三部分的内容。一是Davia生活情况;二是David的爱好和习惯;最后是梦想等。提纲虽然已经列好,写作时,需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从生活、爱好和梦想三个方面,分成三段,讲述了David生活情况。这些内容都比较贴合文章的需要,意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的句型,如because引导的原因状语从句,think和hope的宾语从句以及不定式和恰如其分地使用一般现在时和现在进行时、将来时等。
考点:提纲类作文。