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【题目】Daniel将要转来你们班上学习，班主任请你在班会课上介绍一下Daniel的情况，以便让同学们更快地了解他。请根据下列提示，写一篇80词左右的文章，要求包含所有要点，不包括已经给出的开头句。

姓名	Daniel
	15岁，来自福建。现在和父母一起住在苏州。
学习方面	数学和历史学得好，在英语方面需要帮助。
品质方面	善良，乐于助人。（举例说明）
爱好方面	自你一至两个爱好。

Boys and girls，Daniel is our new classmate．Now I'd like to introduce him to all of you．

Answer 1

【答案】One possible version：

Boys and girls，Daniel is our new classmate．Now I'd like to introduce him to all of you．

His name is Daniel, and he is 15 years old. He comes from Fujian province. Now he lives in Suzhou with his parents. He does well in maths and history, but he has some difficulty learning English, so he needs help. Daniel is kind and ready to help others. Last week, he saw a little boy fall down and helped him stand up. He likes playing basketball and swimming. He often plays it with his friends after school. I hope you will know more about him and make friends with him.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，介绍新转来的同学Daniel。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：Now I'd like to...，and he is...，He does well in....，He likes ...，I think...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。