Question

【题目】书面表达

Millie打算向美国的学生介绍自己的国家，根据表格里的要点，写一篇文章介绍中国。

Country	China
Location	in North Asia, next to Russia, India and Japan
Capital city	Beijing
Languages	Chinese, English as a second language
Population	over 1.3 billion, the first largest population in the world
Crops	rice , wheat and corn
Customs	many festivals and fairs, Qipao—traditional clothes for women
Attractions	the great wall, the Palace Museum, The Temple of Heaven, Tian’anmen Square, Suzhou gardens, the Landscape of Guilin…

注意： 1. 不得出现自己的学校和真实姓名。

2. 必须包含所提示的内容，可以适当发挥。

3. 词数：90词左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

I am Millie. I’m from China. China lies in the north of Asia. It is next to Russion. To the east is Japan, which faces China across the East China Sea. Now it has a population of more than 1.2 billion, making up a quarter of the world population.Our capital is Beijing. We speak Chinese ,and we speak English as a second language. We grow rice , wheat and corn. We have many festivals and fairs. For example, we eat dumplings for Spring Festival. Qipao is the traditional clothes for women. There are a lot of places of interest.. The Great Wall is one of the wonders in the world．The Palace Museum has 9999 palaces. It has a very long history.

The Temple of Heaven is located in southern Beijing.And you can visit Tian’anmen Square, Suzhou gardens, the Landscape of Guilin and so on.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如There are a lot of places of interest.. The Great Wall is one of the wonders in the world等，For example等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。