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19.书面表达(满分15分)
假如你是李明,你的美国笔友Bill 来信询问你的暑假计划.请你根据以下内容给他回一封信,介绍你的暑假活动安排.
内容:1.去看望乡下的爷爷奶奶,帮他们做点事;
          2.去旅游,开阔视野;     
          3.学习,为高中做准备;          
          4.…
要求:1.语句通顺,意思连贯,语法正确,书写规范;
          2.必须包含所有内容,并做适当拓展;
          3.词数70左右.(文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)
参考词汇:visit,countryside,travel,open up one's eyes,get ready for
 
Dear Bill,
Thanks for your letter.I'm very glad that you'll have much fun in your vacation.
In my summer holidays,I want to visit my country's grandparents,I have not met them for three years,I miss them so much.And I want to do some housework for them.
I also want to go to some place to travel,to see growth(我想到一些地方旅游,增长见识).I want to go to Shanghai,understand the metropolitan life and the appearance of the city(我想去上海,了解大都市生活与城市面貌),I want to go to Beijing to see the Great Wall and the Imperial Palace(我想去北京看长城与故宫).
I have to review for the high school knowledge,to lay a good foundation(我得认真复习初中知识,为高一打好基础)Iwouldliketoimprovemyenglishpronunciation. 我想改善我的英语发音.Iwanttoimprovemyenglish. 我想提高我的英语水平.I'd like to see more of the astronomical books我想多看些天文方面的书籍Because I think in a formation of Amateur Astronomers Association因为我想在高一组建天文爱好者协会. Looking for you r reply.
 
…
 Please write soon.
                                              Yours,
                                                          Li Ming.

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文,要求是假如你是李明,你的美国笔友Bill 来信询问你的暑假计划.请你根据以下内容给他回一封信,介绍你的暑假活动安排,因此人称应该是第一人称,时态以一般将来时为主,也可以用到I want to do sth./I'd like to do sth.等句式,安排已经给出,包括1.去看望乡下的爷爷奶奶,帮他们做点事;2.去旅游,开阔视野;3.学习,为高中做准备,还要补充至少一项活动.

解答 Dear Bill,
Thanks for your letter.I'm very glad that you'll have much fun in your vacation.
In my summer holidays,I  want to visit  my country's grandparents,I have not met them for three years,I miss them so much.And I want to do some housework for them.
I also want to go to some place to travel,to see growth.I want to go to Shanghai,understand the metropolitan life and the
appearance of the city,I want to go to Beijing to see the Great Wall and the Imperial Palace.
I have to review for the high school knowledge,to lay a good foundation.I would like to improve my English pronunciation.I want to improve my English.I'd like to see more of the astronomical books.Because I think in a formation of Amateur
Astronomers Association. Looking for your reply.
 Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Ming.

点评 本文是一篇提纲作文,书信的格式已给出,在写作时要注意把自己的暑假安排写清楚,还要补充至少一项活动,让要点更全面.同时选择一般将来时来写,也可以多用到I want to do sth./I'd like to do sth.等句式,让文章更显生动.同时还要注意专有名词的用法和写法.

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