题目内容
【题目】书面表达
2014年12月31日晚23时35分，上海外滩陈毅广场发生拥挤踩踏事故。这次事故致36人死亡，49人受伤，伤者多数是学生。为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，学校将开展以“安全”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点提示和要求写一篇演讲稿。
慎重交友 | make friends, be careful, especially online… |
遇险报警 | be in danger, keep calm, call the police for help… |
安全饮食 | buy and eat food carefully, read instructions and dates, go bad… |
遵守交通规则 | obey the traffic rules, keep to the right in the street… |
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要求：1. 内容必须包括所给的全部要点，可适当发挥。
2. 表达清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
3. 词数80左右。文章开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
How to Keep Safe
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.
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In a word, safety must come first!
【答案】
How to Keep Safe
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe? Here are some of my suggestions.
First, we should be careful when we make friends, especially on line. Second, if we are in danger, we must keep calm and call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Third, we’d better buy and eat food carefully. If the food is in bags, we should read instructions and dates before eating it. Eating food that goes bad will do harm to our health. Fourth, we must obey the traffic rules when we go out. Don’t cross the street when the traffic lights are red. Keep to the right in the street. Besides, summer is coming and we must remember it's dangerous to swim in the river.
In a word, safety must come first!
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇材料作文。所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真审题，深入挖掘题材内涵，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。行文时要注意人称、时态的搭配及主谓一致问题，同时注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点： 这篇短文涵盖了题目要求的所有要点内容，表达准确，意思连贯，符合逻辑。在文章的结构组织上很好地使用了简单句和复合句，同时还使用了表示次序的连接词，文章脉络清晰，自然流畅。此外，文章还使用了一些常用的句式和短语如：we should…，we must…，we’d better…和条件状语从句、祈使句等，这为文章增色不少。
名校课堂系列答案【题目】阅读下面短文，根据短文内容完成表格中所缺信息，每空一词。
The Chinese are very generous with money when it comes to educating their children. Some parents send their children to the best schools or even abroad to England, the US or Australia, regardless(不管) of how much this costs. Many also want their children to take after-school activities where they either learn a musical instrument or ballet, or other classes that will give them a head start in life. The Chinese believe that the more expensive an education is, the better it is, so parents often spend a great deal of money on education. Even poor parents buy a computer for their son or daughter.
However, what most parents fail to see is that the best education they can give their children is usually very cheap. Parents should know their children’s different skills. They will usually be good in some areas while poor in others. What most parents fail to realize though, is that today's children lack(缺乏) confidence.
The problem is that parents are only educating their children on how to take tests and how to study well. They are not teaching them the most important skills that can be helpful to their growth. These skills can also build their confidence.
Parents can help achieve this by teaching their children practical skills like cooking, sewing and other housework.
Teaching a child to cook will improve many of the skills that he will need later in life. Cooking needs patience and time. It is an enjoyable but difficult experience. A good cook always tries to improve his cooking, so he will learn to work hard and gradually finish his job successfully. The result, a well-cooked dinner, will give a child a lot of satisfaction and confidence.
An old machine, such as a broken radio or TV set that you give your child as a toy may make him curious. If he spends hours looking at it, and trying to mend it, your child might become an engineer when he grows up. It is better to do such than teach a child to read a book. These activities can teach them to think, and to use their minds.
How Chinese parents should 【1】their children
Common practice | Being 【2】with money when it comes to education. Sending them to the 【13】schools at home or even abroad. Making them take after-school activities in order to 【4】 them a head start in life. Spending 【5】 money on education. |
Bad results | Children are not_【6】_ |
Suggested ideas | Teaching their children 【7】 skills, which are the most important. Cooking. Sewing. Other housework. Repairing a 【8】 radio or TV. |
【9】 results | Making the children hardworking and confident. Teaching the children to think and to use their【10】. |
【题目】书面表达
去年，绍兴市区有200个公共自行车站点、5000辆自行车投入使用。请根据表格内容写一篇短文，倡导绍兴市民绿色出行。
现状 | 1.交通拥挤； 2.停车困难； 3.…… |
骑车优点 | 1.方便（在医院、学校、公园旁可租车rent）； 2.便宜（1小时内免费）； 3.…… |
你的希望 | …… |
要求：1. 短文必须包括表中全部内容，并补充“现状”和“骑车优点”各1条；
2. “你的希望”至少在两句以上；
3. 文章结构紧凑、行文连贯、表达清楚；
4. 词数：80-100.。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Last year, 200 public bicycle stops and 5000 bicycles were put into use in Shaoxing. Nowadays,__________________________________________________________________
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