Question

8．Write at least 60words about the topic"A success experience in my memory"（以"我记忆中的一次成功经历"为题，写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不计入在内）．
Use the following points as reference．（以下问题仅供参考）
•When did you have your success experience？
•How did it happen？（Please write in detail）
•What have you learnt from the experience？
（注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分．）
In my memory，there are full of success experiences．The most unforgettable one happenedLast term．I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn't get good marks in exams．I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder．I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class．What's more，I often asked my teachers for help．Although I met a lot of difficulties，I didn't give up．Now I have done better in my study．I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it．IfI meet with difficulties in my life，I should try my best to overcome them．In a word，only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful．．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型：
①I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder．我对我的学习感到担心，所以我决定更加努力学习．句子中feel worried about 表示对某某感到担心，decide to do sth决定做某事，后面跟to引导的不定式短语； much harder更努力，much修饰后面的比较级形式．
②What's more，I often asked my teachers for help．更重要的是，我经常向我的老师的寻求帮助．句子中What's more是一个固定短语，表示更重要的是，ask for请求…； 要求…．

解答 In my memory，there are full of success experiences（引出话题）．The most unforgettable one happened Last term（经历发生的时间）．I was not good at subjects at school and I couldn't get good marks in exams．I felt worried about my study so I decided to work much harder（高分句型）．I listened to the teachers more carefully in class and did more exercises after class．What's more，I often asked my teachers for help（高分句型）．Although I met a lot of difficulties，I didn't give up．（具体介绍这次经历的过程）Now I have done better in my study．I believe that nothing is too difficult if I put my heart into it．If I meet with difficulties in my life，I should try my best to overcome them．In a word，only the person who overcomes difficulties will be successful．（从这次经历得到的启示）

点评 本题是一篇以提纲提供情景的作文，内容是我记忆中的一次成功经历，写作时要注意要点齐全，不能漏写，并且要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，使整篇短文意思连贯，表达流畅．