题目内容
20.在初中三年的学习生活中,父母、老师给了我们很多帮助.假设你是李明,在即将毕业之际,用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情.感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一.内容必须包括以下提示点:1、感谢的对象及原因;2、举例说明帮助你的事由、经过和结果;3、你的感受和打算.注意1、文中不得出现真实的人名、校名及地名;=2、词数在80-100之间,已给出的文字不计入总词数.
DearMum/Dad/Mum and Dad,
Words can’t show my thanks to you,Words can’t show my thanks to you.(感谢原因)You’ve taken good care of me in the past three years.When I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and cheer me up.(举例说明)Once I argued with my classmates and I didn’t know how to deal with it.You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others.With your help,I’ve become a popular boy and made a lot of friends.(感受和打算)I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.
Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming.
分析 本题是一篇提纲作文,写作内容是在初中三年的学习生活中,父母、老师给了我们很多帮助.假设你是李明,在即将毕业之际,用英语写一段文字以表达感激之情.要求是感谢的对象在父母、老师中任选其一,根据这个内容可知这里叙述的过去的事情,所以句子应该用一般过去时.后面的感受及打算部分句子应该用一般将来时.用第一人称和第二人称,要注意句子上文之间的衔接.重点短语及句型:take good care of,in trouble,used to,gave me a lot of advice.With your help,I’m so thankful to you 等等
解答 Dear Mum/Dad/Mum and Dad,(感谢的对象)
Words can’t show my thanks to you.(感谢原因)You’ve taken good care of me in the past three years.When I was in trouble,you used to encourage me and cheer me up.(举例说明)Once I argued with my classmates and I didn’t know how to deal with it.You talked with me the whole evening and gave me a lot of advice on how to get along with others.With your help,I’ve become a popular boy and made a lot of friends.(感受和打算)I’m so thankful to you for your love and care that I’ll work harder and try to do better in the future.
Best wishes
Yours
Li Ming
点评 本题是一篇提纲提作文,写给自己的父母或老师的感谢信,学生比较有话说,但是要注意提示要点一定写全.同时还要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性.写作时,要注意谓语动词形式的变化.另外,还需要使用一些句型和短语,使整篇短文意思连贯,表达流畅.
现在请你以Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends?为题,参照表内所提供的信息,写一篇英语短文.
| Your parents’ideas | Your ideas |
| 1.go over lessons | 1.----- |
| 2.have a good sleep | 2.----- |
| 3.help parents do housework | 3.----- |
=2.所写内容必须包括表格中他们的想法和你的至少三个想法.
=3.词数:70个左右.
Should teenagers go out with their friends on weekends?Recently I’ve had a discussion with my parents about whether teenagers should go out with their friends on weekends(父母的想法)My parents think that teenagers should stay at home to go over their lessons.And they should have enough time to have a good sleep.In the meanwhile,they should help their parents do some housework.
(我的三个想法)In my opinion,we teenagers should go out with our friends for fun so that we can relax more.And we can also share ideas with each other.What’s more,we can also take some exercise together to keep fit..
--- asking the teacher for help.( )
| A. | From | B. | At | C. | With | D. | By |