题目内容
【题目】书面表达(满分15分)
假设你们班在毕业前夕讨论填报高中志愿问题,基本上有两种观点,有点同学认为在本地就读高中比在外地就读高中有利,但有的同学认为在外地比在本地有利,他们的观点如下:假设你是李明,九年级三班学生,请根据以下的信息写一篇报道。
有利因素 | 不利因素 | |
本地就读 | 1.便利 2.费用少 | 1.周围有很多同学,容易结伴 2.上网 3不利于独立. |
外地就读 | 1.条件好 2.易独立 | 1.费用高 2.往返时间长,生活不便 |
提示词:study in our city., study out of our city, convenient, be independent (独立), good condition
Dear Editor:
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Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】
Dear editor,
I’m a student in Class One , Crade Three . In the class meeting we had a discussion about which senior high school we’d beter enter , the schools in or out of our city .
Some students think it’s convenient to study in our city while studying out of our city costs lots of money and wastes much time on the way.
Other students think that the schools out of our city may have good conditions and it’s helpful for students to learn to be independent. Besides, without so many old classmates around, they would have less chance to play or go to the net bars together.
The discussion was very heated.I think studying in or out of our city has some advantages and disadvantages. As for me, I prefer studying in my own city.
Yours ,
Li Ming
【解析】
试题分析:考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题,确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点:这篇文章语言规范,叙事清楚,词汇及时态运用正确,能够把提示的内容叙述清楚,语句通顺,意思连贯是一篇不错的文章。