题目内容
6.学校将举行初中英语征文比赛,主题是介绍你的好朋友Nick.请你根据下列要点完成征文.具体内容如下:1.就读于阳光中学八年级.大眼睛圆脸,个子比我高得多.
2.愿意替我保守秘密,是我的忠实朋友.擅长数学,经常帮同学辅导数学难题.
3.他心目中的理想学校在早上8点开始上课,下午4点结束.每个月进行学校旅游一次.
4.痴迷于DIY,喜欢修理东西,装饰房间.
5.他妈妈的生日就要到了,他决定亲手为妈妈做一张生日卡片.
注意:
1.要点齐全、语意连贯、语法正确、书写规范、适当发挥;
2.词数80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数.
My best friend
Nick is my best friend. .
分析 这是一篇提纲式的给材料作文.所给材料较为详细,逻辑清楚,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来.根据要点内容可知短语主要应用一般现在时态,主语为第三人称单数,句型以简单句为主.写作时要灵活运用,注意主谓一致,单词拼写正确.
高分句型:
①He has a round face with big eyes,and he is much taller than me.他大眼睛圆脸,个子比我高得多.这里much taller表示高得多,much修饰比较级形式.
②He likes repairing broken things and decorating the rooms.他喜欢修理东西,装饰房间.句子考查like doing sth表示喜欢做某事,后面跟动词的ing形式.
解答 My best friend
Nick is my best friend.He studies in Sunshine Middle School,Grade eight.He has a round face with big eyes,and he is much taller than me.(高分句型)(介绍基本情况) Nick is willing to keep secrets for me,he is my true friend.so I can tell him everything.He is good at math,He often helps classmates with hard math problems.(热心助人,忠实的朋友)His ideal school day starts at 8:00a.m.and finishes at about 4 p.m.it has a school trip once a month.(理想的学校) Nick is crazy about DIY.He likes repairing broken things and decorating the rooms.(高分句型)(爱好) His mother's birthday is coming.He decides to make a birthday card for her by himself.
How lucky I am to have such a good friend!(为妈妈生日准备贺卡)
点评 这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少.学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理.本文结构紧凑 文中介绍了朋友很多的优点,最后引出在他母亲生日的时候他决定给母亲亲自制作一个卡片.He is always ready to help others.He often helps classmates with maths problems.;How lucky I am to have such a good friend!这些短语和句子的运用也让文章增色不少.
| A. | connect; to | B. | connected; with | C. | connects; to | D. | connecting; to |
---_____________( )
| A. | Goodbye! | B. | Good morning! | ||
| C. | Nice to meet you! | D. | Thank you! |