题目内容
【题目】下面是你对好朋友Tom的个人爱好的调查记录,请你写一份调查报告,介绍一下他的喜好及原因,词数:80~100。调查报告的开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Names | Reasons | |
Bands | Back Street Boys, EXO | Energetic; good singers; look cool; wear fantastic clothes |
Books | Hamlet,Romeo and Juliet | Love stories; romantic; beautiful words |
Movies | Titanic; E.T. | Tragedy; science fiction |
Mike is one of my good friends. He ______________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Tom is one of my good friends. He loves listening to music, reading books and watching movies. He is a super fan of the bands Back Street Boys and EXO because he loves bands that are energetic. He thinks they are good singers. Besides, he thinks the band members look cool and always wear fantastic clothes. When he reads, he prefers reading books like Hamlet and Romeo and Juliet by Shakespeare. They are love stories that are really romantic and Tom likes books that have beautiful words. Also, he likes tragedies and science fictions. Of all the movies, he enjoys Titanic and E.T. best.
【解析】本文属于材料作文,要根据汤姆的个人爱好调查写一个调查报告。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑,可适当增加内容。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的作文,很好的完成了试题规定的任务,语言表达符合英语习惯,准确运用时态、主谓一致,特别适用一些亮点词句,如super fan, because, energetic, besides, fantastic, prefer, enjoy以及定语从句。增强逻辑关系,增加上下文意思连贯,用词准确,句子通顺,行文连贯。