Question

以Great Changes in My Hometown为题，按要求写一篇短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。80词左右。

要求：1.概括家乡的变化；

2. 具体描述家乡在哪些方面取得了较大的发展；

3. 你对家乡变化的感受。

分析：本次写作是描述近几年来自己家乡发生的变化和当前自己的感受，故描述变化情况时多用现在进行时和现在完成时，陈述自己感受则用一般现在时。

行文思路：由题目要求可知，本次写作可分三

部分：第一部分是总体概括家乡的变化；第二部分描述变化具体体现

在哪些方面，如居住条件的改变，道路的改变，学习环境的改变等;第三部分是表达自己的愿望和感受。窗分A拢：注意审题，本次写作主要是描写家乡的变化，不可写成家乡过去与现在情况的对比；行文过程中使用现在完成时时，要注意动词过去分词的变化；表达自己的感受时，可使用较高级句式（如宾语从句）。

佳作展示：

Great Changes in My Hometown

Answer 1

 Great Changes in My Hometown In the past ten years, great changes have taken place in my hometown. People in my hometown are living a happy life with the development of our country.

Now people in my hometown have lived in beautiful and tall buildings. Roads are getting wider and wider. People's living conditions are getting better and better. What's more,children have studied in modern schools and they are getting a good education.

  I feel very excited about the changes in my hometown and I think my hometown will become better and better in the future.