Question

19．为配合通辽市开展的"创建文明城市（build a civilized city）"活动，学校举办以How to Behave Well？为主题的英语征文比赛．现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇80词左右的参赛短文．
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1衣着整洁，保持环境卫生；
2尊敬师长，待人有礼，不说脏话；
3遵守交通规则，公共场所不大声喧哗
4努力学习，遵守校规，积极参加各项活动．
要求：
1文章必须包括所给提示中1～4项内容，可展开思路，适当发挥；
2文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名等．

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
when we are on a bus，we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies．当我们在车上，我们应该给老人孕妇让座．
when引导的时间状语从句．
【高分句型二】
If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and more attractive如果每个人都举止文明，我们的城市就会更美丽更吸引人．
if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现的规则．

解答 How to Behave Well？
In order to build a civilized city，we students should try our best to behave well in the activities．
It's a good habit to keep our clothes clean and tidy．Our city should be kept clean every day．Don't throw litter or spit about．（衣着整洁，保持环境卫生）It's good manners to say"Thank you"and"Please"and so on．We should never say dirty words．Be friendly to others and always ready to help the people in need．For example，when we are on a bus，we should give our seats to the old and the women with babies．．【高分句型一】（尊敬师长，待人有礼，不说脏话）We should also obey traffic rules．When the traffic lights are red，we should stop．And we'd better not talk or laugh loudly in public．（遵守交通规则，公共场所不大声喧哗）As a student，we should study hard and obey the school rules．We are supposed to take an active part in activites．Becuse it's good for our health and study．（努力学习，遵守校规，积极参加各项活动．）
If everyone behaves well，our city will be more beautiful and more attractive．【高分句型二】

点评 这是一篇英文征文比赛的参赛稿，首先一定要明确文章的主题现在请你根据所给提示内容，用英语写一篇参赛短文，所以要用第一人称来写．需要写的内容已经给出，但是写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的文章．需要注意题目要求，注意紧扣文章主题，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词、词组及句型，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．