Question

【题目】在“八礼四仪”教育活动中，同学们收获很大，尤其是李伟同学。请你根据下表内容写一篇英语短文，叙述李伟在活动前后的表现。

1词数在100词左右。文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2文中不得出现真实的姓名。

I am glad that Li Wei has made great progress．_______________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】I am glad that Li Wei has made great progress．In the past, he was often late for school．He used to quarrel with his classmates．He made a lot of noise in class．He seldom cared about the environment．He threw rubbish everywhere．He was so lazy that he didn’t do his homework．Sometimes he played computer games too much．His parents and teachers were all worried about him．Now, he has changed a lot．He comes to school on time．He is friendly to his classmates．He listens to the teachers carefully in class．He often helps collect the rubbish with other students．He is hard-working and often does extra work for us．He can finish his homework on time．All the teachers and classmates like him very much.I hope our class will organize more activities．Our classmates will take part in them actively．We will certainly be friendlier, more helpful and more skillful.

【解析】这是一篇给提纲作文。要求围绕在“八礼四仪”教育活动前后，李伟同学表现为内容写一篇文章。根据内容提示，本文重点对李伟在活动前后的表现加以对比，体现其在此次活动中的收获。并提出至少两条于此活动相关的建议。短文要做到语言点全面，语句通顺、意思连贯，中心突出。短文中需注意一般过去时与用一般现在时态的运用。