Question

【题目】近十年来，随着通讯网络的迅猛发展，手机几乎成为了人们不可或缺的东西。毫无疑问，手机大大改善了我们的生活，但同时也给我们的生活带来了不好的影响。对于这个问题，你班将于下周举行一次英语主题班会来讨论这个话题。请根据表格提示，写一篇英语发言稿。

手机使用的好处	可方便随时上网查阅信息； 如遇突发情况，可及时求助； 3. ……
手机使用的弊端	1. 整天沉迷于手机，很少花时间与家人朋友面对面交流沟通； 2. 长时间看手机对眼睛和脖子健康有害； 3. ……
个人观点和建议	自拟

要求：1. 内容包含以上要点并作适当发挥。

2. 词数：80-120（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。

3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的姓名。

Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the people around the world. ____________________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Nowadays mobile phones are becoming more and more popular among the middle school students. We held a discussion about whether we can take mobile phones with us in our studying time. Different students have different opinions.

Some think we can search the information online at any time and contact our family and friends with the cell-phones. Besides, we can relax ourselves by listening to music or watching movies. And we can turn to others for help when we’re in trouble. While others think differently. First, Some are addicted to cell-phones.They seldom communicate with their family. Second, the radiation from mobile phones is bad for health. Many students often play mobile games and read novels with their mobile phones, which affects their study. Third, many students can’t control themselves and play mobile phones in class.

In my opinion, we can take mobile phones with us in our studying time. But we must use them in the right way.

【解析】这是一篇给材料作文，给出了主要写作要点，主要包括三部分的内容。手机使用的好处，手机使用的弊端，个人观点与建议。动笔前要先认真阅读要点，然后围绕要点适当发挥。写作中，应注意描述的全面性，尽量将提示的内容利用上；结合材料内容，可知短文主要用一般现在时态。第三人称或第一称形式。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。

写作亮点：短文首先结合现代人使用手机的现象，阐述了使用手机的利与弊，接着告诉人们怎样正确地使用好手机。条理分明，层次清楚。短文包含了提纲的所有信息，语句通顺，意思连贯。