Question

【题目】写作

学生会将要邀请Mr Black做一个关于观看音乐会（concert）礼仪的演讲，请根据下列内容，写一个不少于100词的通知，不包括所给的开头和结尾。

Name of the talk:	良好的观看音乐会的礼仪
Purpose of the talk:	教学生观看音乐会的规则
Time:	5月13日，下午2点
Place:	学校礼堂
Content:	1、 提前半小时入场，排队，不插队 2、入场后，与他人小声交谈 3、开始后，保持安静，不讲电话 4．不吃东西，不随意走动 5、结束后，鼓掌，表示感谢
Conclusion:	我们应当确保演奏者和观众都心情舒适、愉快。

要求：1. 字数100左右；

2. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥，使短文连贯通顺；

参考词汇：演奏者：player 观众：audience

Hello, everyone,

May I have your attention, please?

We are going to invite Mr Black to

Thank you very much for your listening.

Answer 1

【答案】

One possible version：

Hello, everyone,

May I have your attention, please?

We are going to invite Mr Black to give us a speech——Good matters of watching the concert at 2:00 a.m. on May 13 th at the school hall. The speech is to teach us the rules of watching the concert. The following are the rules.

We should enter the scene half an hour ahead of time and we must stand in line and can’t cut in the line. We can’t talk with others in whisper after we enter there. Once the concert starts, we should keep quiet and can’t talk on the telephone. During the concert, we can’t eat and walk around. When the concert is over, we should clamp. In all, we should be sure that the performers and audience feel comfortable and delighted.

Thank you very much for your listening

【解析】

试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍Mr Black做一个关于观看音乐会（concert）礼仪的演讲。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构的动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：We are going to.......，The speech is to......，We should .......，We can’t ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系.

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了Mr Black演讲的题目，地点和时间，接下来介绍演讲的内容，最后感谢大家听演讲。此处ahead of time, in line, talk with, keep quiet, walk around, in all, be sure等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。