题目内容
书面表达(满分15分)
请根据写作要点和要求完成作文。
近几年来,中国的中学生中出现了“出国留学热”,成千上万的中学生已经去国外学习,而另外一些学生页一直在设法出国,对此人们有不同的看法。请根据下面的写作要点,以“ Studying Abroad” 为题写一篇90词左右的短文。
【写作要点】
有人认为与外国人交朋友是件很有趣的事情
出国留学既可以了解外国文化,也可以更快地学习外语
也有人认为中学生年纪太小了,不能很好的照顾自己
出国留学的生活和学习费用高
你的看法……
Studying Abroad
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students.________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________
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Studying Abroad
In recent years, studying abroad has been popular with Chinese high school students. Some people think, it’s very interesting to make friends with foreigners . we can not only learn more about their culture, but also can learn foreign language more quickly.
But there are some different opinions. Some people think , the student s are too young to leave home, they can’t take good care of themselves. And the price of life and study is very high.
In my opinion, it is good things for us to study aboard, we can make lots of friends as well as learn much knowledge.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇短文要求我们以studying abroade为题写一篇作文,即出国留学。在题目中给了我们这篇短文的写作提纲,主要包括五部分的内容。一是有人认为与外国人交朋友是件很有趣的事情。二是出国留学既可以了解外国文化,也可以更快地学习外语。三是也有人认为中学生年纪太小了,不能很好的照顾自己。四是出国留学的生活和学习费用高。五是得补充一下你自己的看法……提纲虽然已经列好,但是很多内容都需要我们自己去充实,让它变得完整、合理,内容丰富,这就需要花费我们的想象力,以及我们平时积累的知识。另外,写作时,还需注意语句间的衔接,使文意连贯,表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。作者从出国学习的现状、各种不同的观点、自己的观点、三个方面,分成三段。写出了作文提纲要求的内容,层次非常的清晰。短文中作者自己补充的内容有以下亮点。如在第一段和第三段,运用的it is + adj +(for sb) to do sth 的句型,即:“it’s very interesting to make friends with foreigners 、it is good things for us to study aboard”。在文章第一段运用了表示增加信息量的连词not only ... but also ... (不仅……而且……)即:“we can not only learn more about their culture, but also can learn foreign language more quickly”。还使用了in one’s opinion的表达。以上这些句型和表达的使用,不仅比较贴合的完成的作文的要求,而且是文章通顺连贯。
考点:提纲类作文。
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