Question

盘县人众所周知，盘县将举办2015年旅游发展大会，这将为我县提供许多发展机会。假如你是一个盘县人，你打算怎样为盘县旅游发展做出自己的贡献?请运用所提供的词汇写一篇80词的短文。(参考词汇：as you know，host，citizen of Beijng，chance to develop，do my small part，volunteer)

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

As we all know, Beijing will host the 2008 Olympic Games. It is a great honor for all the Chinese. The Chinese government has promised that the 2008 Olympic Games will be successful, and our country will have more chances to develop quickly.

As a citizen of Beijing, I will do my small part. Firstly, I will help make Beijing more and more beautiful and greener. For example, I can help plant more trees and I won't litter here and there. Secondly, I will try to be a volunteer, so that I can do some work for the government. Thirdly, I will study English hard so that I can help the foreigners know better about Beijing and China.

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试题分析：

这是一篇给材料作文，介绍如何为盘县旅游发展做出自己的贡献。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时和一般将来时，人称为单数第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：our country will ......；I will do.....；so that I can......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了盘县发展旅游业的原因，接下来介绍自己应该做的事，最后自己的努力将会得到的结果。此处用了have more chances to，try to，so that，know better about 等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。