Question

【题目】小明今年暑期想参加上海英语夏令营(Shanghai English Summer Camp)。假设你是小明,请你写一封信向负责人Miss Chen咨询一些信息。要求80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。

内容包括:1.介绍自己的一些个人信息,如姓名、年龄、英语成绩等;2.礼貌询问信息,如时间、吃住、活动、英语学习等; 3.表示感谢。

Dear Miss Chen,

I’m Xiao Ming,a Grade Nine student at Xinxing School._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Xiao Ming

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Miss Chen,

I’m Xiao Ming,a Grade Nine student at Xinxing School. I love English and I hope to improve my English.I’d like to come to your school soon for the English Summer Camp.I am writing to know about more information about the summer camp.Could you please tell me when the summer camp will begin and how long it will last?I also want to know what we will do during the summer camp.Will it be fun?And could you please tell me where we will stay?I’m wondering if the hotel is clean and comfortable.I also want to know if it is convenient to go shopping.What’s more,let me know how much it costs and what I need to take.

I’m looking forward to your reply.

Yours faithfully,

Xiao Ming

【解析】

本文为一封书信。请你向负责人Miss Chen咨询一些信息。根据提示可知包括以下要点：（1）介绍自己的一些个人信息,如姓名、年龄、英语成绩等；（2）礼貌询问信息,如时间、吃住、活动、英语学习等；（3）表示感谢。写作时，首先要明确以上要点，确定时态应为一般现在时态，人称应以第一人称为主。其次，注意书信的书写格式，同时要注意表达准确，语义连贯，符合逻辑。最后，再检查单词是否有拼写错误，标点符号是否有使用错误等。本文多次使用经典短语、固定结构、高分句型等为文章增色不少，如：hope to do, look forward to, if引导的宾语从句,表达委婉强求的句式Could you please …等等。