Question

【题目】书面表达（15分）

还有一个多月就是“母亲节”了。妈妈总是为我们忙碌，忙着忙着，忙花了眼睛；忙着忙着，忙白了头发……妈妈的时间都去哪儿了？请你根据下面四幅图写一篇短文并谈谈自己对妈妈的感受。

要求：

文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；

语言通顺，意思连贯，条理清楚，书写规范，可适当发挥；

词数80左右。

What does Mum spend time on？

Answer 1

【答案】

Mum is always busy. She does most of the housework at home, such as cleaning, washing and cooking. Dad and I think she is a good cook and a housewife. My grandparents are in poor health, so she often looks after them at the weekend. They think she is a good daughter. Mum is also very hard-working in her company. Her boss thinks she devotes herself to her work. In her free time, Mum spends some time shopping for the family.

Mum is really busy every day. Now I have grown up and I think I should do something for her. Mother’s Day is coming up. I really want to say Happy Mother’s Day to her.

【解析】

试题分析：这篇作文要求我们以母亲节为话题谈一谈自己对妈妈的感受。在题目中给出了我们作文的主题，并且有一幅图片，向我们展示了妈妈的时间都是怎么度过的。操持家务，照顾老人，干好自己的工作…等等。我们在这些内容的基础上，再加上自己对妈妈的感情，将这些内容用正确的英语表达出来。这篇作文自己发挥的空间很大，但是一定要注意切合主题。联系平时我们积累的有关母亲话题的句型和词汇，注意语句的连贯，表达的流畅。通过审题可知，这篇作文应主要使用一般现在时，第三人称来描述，因此要动词的形式变化。

【亮点说明】这是一篇非常优秀的作文。在这篇短文中作者根据题目的要求写了自己对妈妈的感受，在第一段中作者描写了妈妈的时间都是怎样度过的。She does most of the housework at home, such as cleaning, washing and cooking. My grandparents are in poor health, so she often looks after them at the weekend. Mum is also very hard-working in her company.从这三个方面做了描写。接下来的第二段中作者写了自己对妈妈的感情，I think I should do something for her. Mother’s Day is coming up. I really want to say Happy Mother’s Day to her.感情真挚，切合主题。整篇短文表达流畅，意思连贯，语言准确。