Question

【题目】学校20周年校庆马上就到了。届时，将会有许多毕业生回到母校来参观并看望老师。你作为一名志愿服务者来接待学长们，将在报告厅向他们简单介绍学校现在的基本情况，并谈谈你个人对创建和谐美好校园的建议及对学校美好未来的祝福。

现状	校园美丽，干净，舒适
	师生之间关系融洽
	学生好学，兴趣广泛，课外活动丰富
建议和祝福	（自拟一至两点内容）

注意：1.表达中须包含所给要点，可以适当发挥。 2.字数80左右。开头已写好，不计入总词数。3.文中表达不要提及真实校名及姓名。

Answer 1

【答案】

Our school is very beautiful now. There are many flowers everywhere . It’s not only clean but also comfortable. The students are friendly and the teachers in my school are as kind to us as our parents. We get along well with our teachers. we have lots of fun at school. we not only have all kinds of classes, but also take part in colorful activities after classes. We all work hard at our lessons.

I think our library should get more books so that we can read widely. I feel proud of my school because it is one of the best schools in my heart. I wish my school will become more beautiful and more morden.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用表格的给材料作文。要求介绍校园的现状, 并对建设美好校园提出自己的建议，对学校表示美好的祝福。

【亮点说明】这篇短文内容切题，意思连贯，表达清楚、完整。词汇和句型句式运用恰当。能应用好的短语和连词，如not only ,but also. as…as 等。