题目内容

一年当中, 我们快乐的日子是过生日那天,哪一次生日是让你难忘的呢?在你的生日宴会上,朋友们做了哪一些有趣的事?请你围绕本话题写一篇作文。

要求:1.内容严谨,结构完整。

2.至少80词。

3.不得使用真实的姓名, 地名和学校。

4.题目自拟。

One possible version:

I like birthday very much. And I will never forget my tenth birthday. When I was ten years old, I asked a lot of friends to my birthday party at home. My mother cooked a lot of delicious food. There was a lot of fruit, too. We listened to music, sang happy songs and played games happily. And we ate a very big cake. My friends gave me many presents such as books, pens, CDs and so on. They wished me to be healthy. Everyone had a good time on that day.

【解析】试题分析:本篇书面表达要求记述一次难忘的生日。写作时应注意时态,用一般过去时。同时,写作应注意文章结构和层次,选用合适的连接词或过渡词,使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒:考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况,有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,准确运用时态。文章衔接连贯,运用了and, when, too, such as等连词进行衔接。同时,本文中运用了大量的固定句式和短语,为文章增色不少。如: have a good time等。

考点:提纲作文。

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