Question

9．健康是人生的一笔财富，请以"A Healthy Lifestyle"为题从健康饮食、体育锻炼   和养成良好的生活习惯等方面写一篇短文，要求请根据下面表格的内容提示，并将答案填写在答题卡对应题号的横线上．
要求：1．语句完整，意思连贯，语法正确．
2．字数80个词左右．
3．可适当发挥．

1	food	more vegetables，fruit，less meat…
2	exercise	do more exercise，take a walk，play ball games…
3	good habits	go to bed early，keep away from computer games…

A Healthy Lifestyle．
                                                          

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一
On the other hand doing exercise is another good way to keep us healthy．另一方面，做运动是保持健康的另一个好方法． doing exercise 是动名词，在这做主语．
高分句型二
You had better not smoke and drink alcohol and you should get plenty of sleep．你最好不要抽烟喝酒，你应该有充足的睡眠．had better not do sth．最好不要做某事．

解答 A Healthy Lifestyle
Healthy Lifestyle is very important to us．Everyone wants to live a healthy life．【开篇点明主题】
On the one hand，healthy diet does good to our body，and more and more people like vegetables and fruit as well as rice．We must have breakfast，lunch and supper on time and eat little snack．On the other hand doing exercise is another good way to keep us healthy【高分句型一，注意动名词做主语的使用】．Exercise makes you strong．Besides the above，you should avoid unhealthy habits．You had better not smoke and drink alcohol and you should get plenty of sleep【高分句型二，注意had better句型的使用】．It is a good habit to get up early with less staying up．【正文部分详细介绍如何保持良好的生活习惯】
On the whole，don't take your good health today for granted．Take care of our body from today on．【结尾部分紧扣主题】

点评 本篇写作需注意要求中所提供的要点，不可遗漏．需在平时积累相关的词汇，多阅读此类题材，将词汇归类整理；动笔前可以按照材料内容列出简单提纲，写出关键单词．写作中注意语义通顺，符合逻辑关系．上下文之间可以适当使用连接词．如but，so，then等．