Question

【题目】书面表达 （10分）

根据所给图画，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文。要求完整叙述图画内容。

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Answer 1

【答案】This morning I saw a traffic accident on my way to school. It happened at a crossing near our school gate. At that time, the traffic lights turned red, but a young man didn’t stop his car. And he drove very fast. At the same time, a man riding a bike came and it hit the man. The man was badly hurt and the bicycle was also broken. But the driver ran away 。What a terrible scene! So I called the police and finally caught the driver。We should obey the traffic rules and be careful on the road.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇看图作文，介绍一次交通事故。动笔前先要认真看图，然后根据图中的内容进行叙述。结合所给材料，可知本文主要记述的是过去发生的事情，故时态主要是一般过去时态。人称为第三人称。写作中注意叙述顺序，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。文中适当使用代词，注意避免句式的单调重复，避免单词及语法错误。

写作亮点：本文语句通顺流畅，表达了图片中的基本内容。