Question

【题目】现在很多同学都有许多不良习惯。例如，经常吃零食、 不爱运动、乱扔垃圾、不讲卫生等等。这些都是极其不好的习惯，对身体有大的危害。请你写一篇短文，指出害处并提出有利于健康的好习惯。不少于80 词。

1．要点完整、层次清晰、语法正确、上下文连贯。

2．文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。

Answer 1

【答案】

Now many students have had habits. They eat too many snacks and they dislikes sports. They throw litter here and there. They don’t protect the environment at all. These habits are bad. They are also bad for their health. If you eat too many snacks before meals, you will not feel like eating any food .Then you will be ill. So stop eating snacks. We should eat more vegetables and fruit and take more exercise. If we do so, we'll be healthier and happier.

【解析】

试题分析：我们首先应该确定用一般现在时态，本文应用第一人称。灵活采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求准确、简洁。最后必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：本文时态使用准确，叙事流畅，内容表达清晰，使用了不少固定结构，如：be bad for, not at all, here and there等。文中还使用then, so, if等词使文章内容连贯, 语言流畅，最后条件状语从句的使用十分恰当。