Question

【题目】 假期许多同学都外出旅游，旅游不但让我们开阔眼界，也让我们放松心情。《21世纪英文报》正在开展“快乐旅游”的征文活动。请你写一篇作文投稿，谈谈你难忘的一次旅游经历，包括：你什么时间去哪儿旅游了，在那儿做了什么，旅游的感受如何。

提示词：visit, delicious, photos, scenery, exciting, enjoy, ...

提示问题: 1. When and where did you go?

2. What did you do there?

3. What do you think of your trip?

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Answer 1

【答案】例文：

I went on a trip to Shanghai with my parents last summer holiday. We visited Yuyuan. It is a Chinese traditional building. And we enjoyed various kinds of delicious food from all over China. We had a long walk on the bund of Shanghai. There are many old tall buildings along Huangpu River. Some of them have a history of hundreds of years. We went to the landmark – the Oriental Pearl TV town. You went to the top of it to enjoy the beautiful scenery of Shanghai. We took many photos there. What an exciting trip we had in Shanghai!

【解析】

本篇为话题作文，要求按照提示完成一篇短文，讲述自己的一次旅行经历。要求短文要包含题干所有的提示信息，适当发挥，语言连贯，逻辑清晰。

1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求用第一人称讲述自己的一次旅行经历。讲述发生过的事情，用一般过去时；文中包含什么时候去哪儿、做了什么、觉得这次旅行怎么样；书写时要注意文句通顺，内容完整。