Question

14．良好的生活习惯对我们的成长非常重要．你认为良好的生活习惯应当是怎样的？请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，不要逐词翻译，可适当发挥．
提示：1．吃得好，才能有健康的身体．
2．必须吃早餐，给身体提供能量．
3．饮食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品．
4．早睡早起身体好．
5．参加体育锻炼，强身健体．
I think good habits are important to us．As we know，we must have enough food to keep us healthy．Breakfast is necessary．It gives us energy in the morning．We must also have the right kind of food．Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food．Don't forget to wash your hands before meals．We should go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late at night is bad for our health．Of course，it's necessary for us to take exercise．Exercise will keep us active and strong．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是谈谈良好的生活习惯应当是怎样的．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．吃得好，才能有健康的身体．
2．必须吃早餐，给身体提供能量．
3．饮食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品．
4．早睡早起身体好．
5．参加体育锻炼，强身健体．
常用到的重点短语：
keep healthy 保持健康
remember to do sth 记得去做某事
forget to do sth 忘记去做某事
go to bed 上床睡觉
get up 起床
stay up 熬夜
be bad for对…不利

【高分句型】
1．①Staying up late at night②is bad for our health．
①动名词短语做主语，谓语动词用单数is．
②be bad for对…不利
2．①Of course，②it's necessary for us to take exercise．
①of course 当然
②it is+adj+for sb+to do sth对某人来说做某事是怎么样的，it是形式主语，动词不定式做真正主语．

解答 I think good habits are important to us．As we know，we must have enough food to keep us healthy．（吃得好，才能有健康的身体）Breakfast is necessary．It gives us energy in the morning．（必须吃早餐，给身体提供能量）We must also have the right kind of food．Remember to eat more fruit and vegetables but less junk food．（饮食要健康，多吃水果、蔬菜，少吃垃圾食品）Don't forget to wash your hands before meals．We should go to bed early and get up early．Staying up late at night is bad for our health．【高分句型】（早睡早起身体好）Of course，it's necessary for us to take exercise．【高分句型】Exercise will keep us active and strong．（参加体育锻炼，强身健体．）

点评 本篇作文由于提纲材料本身决定了写作对象、范围、目的、体裁等，命题者的意图往往较容易领悟，考生在审题上一般不会出现障碍．可根据内容要点提示运用相关的句型结构灵活的展开作文．考生需注意不要逐词逐句地进行翻译，所写句子要符合英语的表达习惯．