假如你是方芳.你打算在端午节那天邀请你的美国外教Amy与你一起踏青．请根据以下提示.给她写一封电子邮件．写作要点:(1)介绍端午节的历史．(2)介绍踏青的具体事项．集合时间:6月20日上午8点踏青地点:松花江畔交通方式:乘坐12路公交车(3)向Amy讲述中国人是如何度过端午节的．写作要求:(1)不得使用真实的姓名和学校名．(2)可适当加入细� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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6．假如你是方芳，你打算在端午节那天邀请你的美国外教Amy与你一起踏青．请根据以下提示，给她写一封电子邮件．
写作要点：
（1）介绍端午节的历史（2000多年，纪念屈原）．
（2）介绍踏青的具体事项．
集合时间：6月20日上午8点
踏青地点：松花江畔
交通方式：乘坐12路公交车
（3）向Amy讲述中国人是如何度过端午节的（要写出具体的行为）．
写作要求：
（1）不得使用真实的姓名和学校名．
（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯．
（3）字迹工整，语言精练，表达准确，条理清晰．
（4）至少80词．
参考词汇：端午节the Dragon Boat Festival 踏青 go outing
Dear Amy，
It's with the great pleasure that I write to you to express my invitation．The Dragon Boat Festival has a history of more than 2000 years．It is to commemorate the great poet Qu Yuan who is known by everyone in China．Qu yuan，see their country was aggression，heart ached，but always cannot bear to part with their own motherland，in wrote in his"sand"later，bouldering miluo river body death，in his own life wrote a song of magnificent patriotic movement．Since then people will eat"zong zi"and dragon-boat racing on May 5 every year．
Let's meet at songhuajiangpan at 8am 20th June．We can take the No.12 bus to there．On that day，we will go climbing the Mountain．Then we will have a picnic on the top of the mountain．After that，we will go to visit the plants garden．And take out some food．If you want you can take out your camera．We will have a great time on that day．
I do hope that you will be able to come．
Yours，
Fangfang．

分析高分句型：
句型一：
It is to commemorate the great poet Qu Yuan who is known by everyone in China．它是为了纪念伟大的诗人屈原每一个中国人都知道．
who引导的定于从句
be known by 表示被所有人知道、认识．
句型二：
If you want you can take out your camera．如果你想要你可以带上你的相机．
if引导条件状语从句．
take out把…带出去

解答 TDear Amy，
It's with the great pleasure that I write to you to express my invitation．
The Dragon Boat Festival has a history of more than 2000 years．It is to commemorate the great poet Qu Yuan who is known by everyone in China．【高分句型一】Qu yuan，see their country was aggression，heart ached，but always cannot bear to part with their own motherland，in wrote in his"sand"later，bouldering miluo river body death，in his own life wrote a song of magnificent patriotic movement．Since then people will eat"zong zi"and dragon-boat racing on May 5 every year．（中国人如何过端午节）
Let's meet at songhuajiangpan at 8am 20th June．We can take the No.12 bus to there．On that day，we will go climbing the Mountain．Then we will have a picnic on the top of the mountain．After that，we will go to visit the plants garden．（踏青事项）And take out some food．If you want you can take out your camera．【高分句型二】We will have a great time on that day．
I do hope that you will be able to come．
Yours，
Fangfang．

点评写作主要考查学生综合运用英语语言的能力，涉及学生的词汇量，正确运用单词的能力，对所学语法的掌握程度，能否按照英语习惯正确表达所要表达的意思的能力等等．