Question

【题目】书面表达 12分

我们应该从不同角度看待一个问题，权衡事物的利弊。现在网络越来越发达，“中学生上网的利弊”

已成为人们讨论的焦点。请以此为话题，根据提示，写一篇80词左右的短文，并谈谈你的看法。

利：课后放松；辅助学习；传递信息快，开拓视野，网络交流。

弊：长时间上网有害健康；沉迷网络，不思学习；不良网站，误导学生进入虚拟空间，真假难辨。

Answer 1

【答案】

Today the Internet develops more and more quickly.People have different opinions on the influence to students.

Some people think the Internet is good for the students. The students are tired in school and the Internet can make them relax. They can also learn more knowledge from the Internet. They can get the information that they need quickly from the Internet. It makes the students learn more in the world. What's more, the students can make friends and chat with each other on the Internet. This can help them grow up better.

However, some people think the Internet is bad for the students. They think the children spend too much time on it and it's bad for their health.If the children always play it, they don't want to study any more. Some bad websites lead the students to know the bad things. Besides, the Internet is not true. The students are so young that they can't tell which is right or wrong.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求根据提示以中学生上网的利弊为话题，写一篇80词左右的短文，并谈谈你的看法。写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如Some people think the Internet is good for the students. The students are tired in school and the Internet can make them relax. They can also learn more knowledge from the Internet.句式The students are so young that they can't tell which is right or wrong.的应用更使得短文表述更准确。总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。