Question

11．Jimmy 是一个初中生，自从参加了Buddy Club他改变了很多，并且他认为还会变得更好，请根据以下表格，假设你是Jimmy，写一篇60词左右短文．开头已给出．

	In the past	Now
Personalities	shy，quiet，get nervous easily	brave，outgoing
Hobbies	reading	reading，singing
Abilities		good at dancing，singing

Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly．Jimmyused to be a shy and quiet girl．He used to get nervous easily．His face often turned red when he spoke with strangers．【高分句型一】He liked nothing but reading alone in his free time．However，he has changed a lot since he joined the Buddy Club．Now Jimmy is so brave and outgoing that he isn't afraid of speaking out in public anymore．【高分句型二】What's more，he has lots of hobbies，such as singing，writing and dancing．He is good at them as well．（Jimmy的变化）
People should change all the time，right？What we should do is to learn from Jimmy．Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves．（我的感想）．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
His face often turned red when he spoke with strangers．
句中"when he spoke with strangers"为时间状语从句，这句话意为：当他跟陌生人说话时，他的脸经常变红．
高分句型二：
Now Jimmy is so brave and outgoing that he isn't afraid of speaking out in public anymore．
句中使用了"so…that…如此…以致于…"结构，其中that后跟的是结果状语从句，句中短语有"be afraid of doing sth 害怕做某事"．这句话意为：现在Jimmy很勇敢、外向，他不再害怕在公共场合大声说话．

解答 Joining a club sometimes changes a person greatly．（开篇点题）
Jimmy used to be a shy and quiet girl．He used to get nervous easily．His face often turned red when he spoke with strangers．【高分句型一】He liked nothing but reading alone in his free time．However，he has changed a lot since he joined the Buddy Club．Now Jimmy is so brave and outgoing that he isn't afraid of speaking out in public anymore．【高分句型二】What's more，he has lots of hobbies，such as singing，writing and dancing．He is good at them as well．（Jimmy的变化）
People should change all the time，right？What we should do is to learn from Jimmy．Change ourselves and choose to be the best of ourselves．（我的感想）

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