Question

书面表达（15分）

假如你Dave，请根据表格信息介绍自己，可适发挥。

要求：语句通顺，语意连贯，语法正确。大约80词左右。

Name	Dave	Age	13
Appearance（外貌）	中等个子，偏瘦，黑色短发
Hobbies（爱好）	听音乐，打篮球 …
上周末活动	忙碌高兴	周六上午做作业；下午和父母开车去奶奶家 ……
上周日上午和朋友打篮球；下午听音乐……

My name is Dave. I’m 13.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

My name is Dave. I’m 13. I’m of medium height and I’m a little thin . I have short black hair. I like singing. I also like playing basketball.

Last weekend, I was busy but happy. On Saturday morning, I did my homework at home. In the afternoon, I visited my grandparents with my parents. We went there by car. On Sunday morning I played basketball with my friend. And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇让小作者写自我介绍和上个周末的活动情况。小作者把要求写的几点都表述得很清晰。另外，写作时，小作者还注意了语句间的衔接，使文意连贯，表达流畅。

【亮点说明】这是一篇比较不错的作文。小作者把列举的要点都写了进去。这些内容也比较贴合文章的需要，意思也很连贯。文章中还用了一些比较好的短语和句型，如On Sunday morning I played basketball with my friend. And in the afternoon, I listened to the music and did some reading. 这些句子使文章添色不少。

考点：表格提纲类作文。