Question

【题目】书面表达。（25分）

请你以A trip to Wuxi为题写一篇短文，包括以下要点：

1、上周你和家人一起乘长途汽车去了无锡；

2、你们在那儿呆了两天；

3、第一天你们看了著名的太湖风景，参观了一些名胜，拍了许多照片；

4、第二天你们去购物，买了一些纪念品；

5、你们玩得很开心，不会忘了这次有意义的经历。

Answer 1

【答案】

A trip to Wuxi

Wuxi is a beautiful city.

Last week, my family and I took a bus to Wuxi. We stayed there for two days. On the first day we saw the famous Taihu Lake and visited some places of interest. We also took a lot of photos. On the second day we went shopping and bought some souvenirs. We played very happily. We won’t forget the meaningful experience.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文为话题类作文，要求以A trip to Wuxi为题写一篇短文。写作要点已经列出，要求明确，故要完成写作任务，务必把各要点表达清楚。

写作亮点：本篇范文成功地完成了写作任务，要点全面，结构连贯。本文应用了很多短语使得文章很生动，例如Last week, my family and I took a bus to Wuxi. We stayed there for two days. On the first day we saw the famous Taihu Lake and visited some places of interest.一般现在时态、一般过去时态、一般将来时态的应用更使得短文表述更准确Wuxi is a beautiful city. Last week, my family and I took a bus to Wuxi. We won’t forget the meaningful experience.总之，该文是一篇不错的短文。