Question

书面表达 (本大题共10分)

假设你叫刘涛，给美国的笔友Jack写信，向他介绍你在初三的学习生活:

要点:1.目前你忙于学习，几乎抽不出时间写信。

2.虽然你时常感到压力，但你相信充足的睡眠会有帮助，所以总是仔细计划你的每一天。

3.父母在学习上对你很严格，他们不允许花时间做别的事情，你对此感到很糟。

4.你认为……

注意:1.第四要点的内容须用2-3句话作适当的发挥。

2.短文必须包括所有内容要点，要求语句通顺，意思连贯。

3.词数80左右，短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your last letter. You want to know about my school life. Now let me tell you about it. _________________________________________

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Would you like to tell me something about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours truly,

Liu Tao

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Jack,

Thank you for your last letter. You want to know about my school life. Now let me tell you about it. I’m so busy with studies that I can hardly spare time to write to you at present. Although I feel stressed at times, I believe enough sleep can be helpful. So I always plan my day carefully. My parents are very strict with me in my studies. They don’t allow me to do anything else. I feel bad about that. I think it’s necessary to have some time for my hobbies. I can achieve a balance between my schoolwork and hobbies. Would you like to tell me something about your school life? I hope to hear from you soon.

Yours truly,

Liu Tao

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇给材料作文，以刘涛的名字给美国的笔友杰克写信，向他介绍自己在初三的学习生活。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一般现在时态，人称为单数第一，二人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如：so…… that ……; I believe……; it’s necessary to……及Would you like to……？等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，注意文后要表达希望尽快收到他的来信的意愿。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头感谢杰克的来信，接下来介绍自己现在的学习生活情况，最后询问杰克是否愿意告诉自己他的学校生活情况。此处短语tell sb. about sth, feel stressed , allow sb. to do sth, would like to do sth, hear from的运用也让文章增色不少。

考点：提纲作文。