Question

【题目】假如你是Alice, 你想写一封推荐信，推荐你的同学Daniel获得今年的新星奖。推荐

信字数为100词左右。开头，结尾已给出，不计入总字数。

Excellent qualities （优秀的品质）	Good examples （好的事例）
乐于助人	1.经常帮助同学做家庭作业。 2.经常与同学们一起打扫公园。 3.在公交车上……（至少一点）
聪明	1．学东西快，学好所有的学科，计划好所有的事情。 2．当我们去野营时他会搭建帐篷。
勇敢	一个周日的早晨，一个小女孩掉到湖里，他跳进湖里，把小女孩从水里救了上来，最后并送她回家。
有礼貌	经常向老师问好，经常帮老师擦黑板。

Dear Sir / Madam,

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. ________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

He is clever._________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

He is brave, too._____________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

He is polite.__________________________________________________________________

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All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

I would like to recommend Daniel for this year’s Young Star Award.

Daniel is a helpful boy. He often helps his classmates with their homework. He often cleans up the park with his classmates. He always gives his seat to someone/others on the bus(in need).

He is very clever. He learns things quickly. He works hard at all his subjects.(He is good at all his subjects.)He plans everything well. He can put up a tent when we go camping.

He is brave, too. One Sunday morning a girl fell into the lake. He jumped into the lake and saved her from the water. At last he sent/took her to her home.

Daniel is polite .He often says “hello” to the teacher. He often helps the teacher to clean the blackboard.

All the students in our class think that Daniel should get the award. We look forward to hearing from you soon.

Yours faithfully,

Alice

【解析】本篇书面表达要求根据提纲内容推荐Daniel获得今年的新星奖，内容包括表格内所有的信息。根据对题目的分析可知，书信要用一般现在时来陈述，并采用第三人称来写作。为了使行文流畅、上下文衔接自然，写作时要灵活运用连接词或过渡语言，使文章有一定的连贯性。同时要注意语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；要灵活运用自己熟悉的高级词句，以提高文章的档次。最后必须认真检查是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。