Question

1．一张照片，一个故事，一段美好的时光．请你用英语写一篇不少于80 词的短文和大家一起分享照片背后的故事．
内容包括：
1．拍照的时间、地点；
2．照片中的人物和情景；
3．照片背后的故事和你的感受．
I have a lot of photos．Whenever Ilook at these pictures，Iwill think of the days that have passed．One of the most important photos wastaken nearly8 years ago，when I was only 6years old．
This picture was taken in front of my grandparents'old house．There is a tall tree near the house．The house looks old but clean，very small but lovely．In this picture，my grandparents are sitting in the middle．My father and mother are standing behind them．Iam sitting on my grandma's laps．There is a big smile on our faces．
The old house was pulled down a few years ago．Many new buildings and roads have been built up since then．And we have moved into a new apartment．Ihave grown up，but Istill remember the old days．Imiss the old house，the kind neighbors and the kids that Iplayed with in the yard．Thepicture always reminds me of the happy days in the old house．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是大家一起分享照片背后的故事．时态主要为一般现在时和一般过去时、现在完成时．人称主要为第一、三人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
1．拍照的时间、地点；
2．照片中的人物和情景；
3．照片背后的故事和你的感受．
常用到的重点短语：
think of 想起
in front of 在…前面
there be 有
pull down 推倒
remind sb of 让某人想起
【高分句型】
1．①One of the most important photos ②was taken nearly 8 years ago，③when I was only 6 years old．
①one of+the+最高级+名词复数 最怎么样的…之一
②一般过去时的被动语态was/were+过去分词．
③when引导的时间状语从句．
2．I miss the old house，the kind neighbors and the kids that I played with in the yard．
that I played with 是定语从句，先行词是the kids，关系词that做从句的宾语．

解答 I have a lot of photos．Whenever I look at these pictures，I will think of the days that have passed．One of the most important photos was taken nearly 8 years ago，when I was only 6 years old．【高分句型】（拍照的时间）This picture was taken in front of my grandparents'old house．（拍照地点）There is a tall tree near the house．The house looks old but clean，very small but lovely．In this picture，my grandparents are sitting in the middle．My father and mother are standing behind them．I am sitting on my grandma's laps．There is a big smile on our faces．（照片中的人物和情景）
The old house was pulled down a few years ago．Many new buildings and roads have been built up since then．And we have moved into a new apartment．I have grown up，but I still remember the old days．I miss the old house，the kind neighbors and the kids that I played with in the yard．【高分句型】The picture always reminds me of the happy days in the old house．（照片背后的故事和你的感受）

点评 提纲作文是一项能够充分考查学生语言综合运用能力的题型．主要考查学生运用已学的语言基础知识和已掌握的英语写作技能准确表达客观事实，阐述个人观点，进行思想交流的书面表达能力．为了提高书面表达水平，平时应加强阅读，应背诵一些句型、段落、甚至短文．只要读得多，背得多，就能出口成章，下笔成文．此外，还要了解英文写作方面的基础知识，掌握常用文体的写作方法．其实，用英文写信，记日记等都是学生力所能及且行之有效的练习写作的好方法．