Question

假设Jeff 是你的朋友 请你以“My friend，Jeff.”为题写一篇关于Jeff的作文，作文的内容必须包括下面的信息（15分）

1．美国人，1999年出生。

2. 对Jeff的外貌简单的描述

3家住离学校很远的公寓大楼，

4. 校园生活（school life）

5. 暑假将到，Jeff 对暑假的计划和安排

温馨提示：①要点齐全，语言流畅，表达清楚；绝不能逐字逐句翻译 ②书写规范，字迹清楚；③词数： 80词左右

My friend, Jeff

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Jeff is my good friend. He was born in 1999 in American. He is tall with a round face and big blue eyes .He lives in an apartment building. It is far from his school. So every morning he gets up early and has a quick breakfast at seven o’clock. Then he goes to school by bus. .Classes at eight o’clock. There are four classes in the morning and three classes in the afternoon. Jeff likes Chinese best. Because he thinks it is interesting. Jeff likes travelling . So this summer holiday he plans to go to Mount Fanjing with his parents because the weather there is cool in summer.

【解析】

试题分析：考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。