Question

9．1．作为一名中学生，在日常生活中应该怎样做才能保护我们的环境呢？请根据下面的提示已"How to protect our environment"为题写一篇80字左右的短文．
（1）禁止乱扔垃圾．        
（2）尽量以步代车或骑自行车．
（3）节约用水、电．节省文具用品杜绝浪费．
（4）应该尽量使用可再利用杯、饭盒，这样就可以大大减少垃圾的产生．
（5）要爱护花草树木，并且积极参加植树活动．
How to protect our environment．
As a student，what can we do to protect our environment？Well，we can't throw rubbish here and there．If possible，we should walk or ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or a car，because cars and taxis make a lot of pollution．Don't waste water or electricity and try to use fewer school things．Always use reusable cups，lunch boxes so that we can reduce waste．Also，we should care for flowers and trees and take an active part in planting trees．I believe if everyone protects our environment，it will because better．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是以"How to protect our environment"为题谈谈在日常生活中应该怎样做才能保护我们的环境．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
（1）禁止乱扔垃圾．        
（2）尽量以步代车或骑自行车．
（3）节约用水、电．节省文具用品杜绝浪费．
（4）应该尽量使用可再利用杯、饭盒，这样就可以大大减少垃圾的产生．
（5）要爱护花草树木，并且积极参加植树活动．
常用到的重点短语：
instead of 而不是
try to do sth 尽力做某事
care for 照顾
take part in 参加
【高分句型】
1．①If possible，we should walk or ride a bike②instead of taking a taxi or a car，③because cars and taxis make a lot of pollution．
①if possible如果可能的话，是省略句，完整表达是if it is possible．
②instead of 而不是
③because引导的原因状语从句．
2．Always use reusable cups，lunch boxes so that we can reduce waste．
so that引导的目的状语从句．

解答 As a student，what can we do to protect our environment？Well，we can't throw rubbish here and there．（禁止乱扔垃圾）If possible，we should walk or ride a bike instead of taking a taxi or a car，because cars and taxis make a lot of pollution．（尽量以步代车或骑自行车）【高分句型】Don't waste water or electricity and try to use fewer school things（节约用水、电．节省文具用品杜绝浪费）．Always use reusable cups，lunch boxes so that we can reduce waste．（应该尽量使用可再利用杯、饭盒，这样就可以大大减少垃圾的产生）【高分句型】Also，we should care for flowers and trees and take an active part in planting trees．（要爱护花草树木，并且积极参加植树活动）I believe if everyone protects our environment，it will because better．

点评 以提纲提供情景的作文．要注意遣词造句的灵活性和语法规则的正确性，就不会造成审题不清而偏离主题，但要注意，文章必须覆盖所提供的各个提纲的要点．行文间要注意简化描述，用简短的语句代替冗长的语句．在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节．