Question

1．假如你班将举行以"中学生自我保护"为主题的英语班会，请你根据下面的提示写一封100次左右的安全倡议书，可适当发挥．
内容提示：
1．不带管制刀具到学校；
2．不私自下河游泳；
3．不打架；
4．上学的路上注意安全，遇到紧急情况要报警；
参考词汇：
管制刀具  restricted knives   紧急情况  emergency
Asweknow，safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlives．So，weshouldtryourbesttomakesurewearesafe．We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems．Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission．And，we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned．Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home．Furthermore，if we meet some emergency，we must call for help from the police or our teachers．
In a word，following these safety rules above can make us live in peace．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文．内容是就中学生自我保护问题，向全校学生发出倡议．时态主要为一般现在时．人称主要为第一人称．
写作思路：考生需要首先审清主题，围绕主题展开作文．
其次考生可从以下几个方面展开作文，即本文的写作要点：
（1）不带管制刀具到学校；
（2）不私自下河洗澡；
（3）不打架；
（4）上学的路上注意安全，遇到紧急情况要报警；

常用到的重点短语：
restricted knives or things管制刀具：
have a bath洗澡
try one's best to do sth 竭尽全力做某事
be friendly to sb 对某人友好
pay attention to 留意，关注
on one's way to  sp．在某人去某地的路上
furthermore此外
in a word总之
make sb do sth让某人做某事
 in peace和平地
高分句型：
1．①Furthermore，②if we meet some emergency，we must call for help from the police or our teachers．
①furthermore此外，引出下文．
②if引导的条件状语从句，主句含有情态动词must，从句用一般现在时代替一般将来时．
2．①In a word，②following these safety rules above can ③make us live in peace．
①in a word总之，总述以上内容．
②following these safety rules above 动名词短语做主语
③make sb do sth让某人做某事，make的用法

解答 How to Protect Ourselves
As we know，safety is the most important thing in our lives．So，we should try our best to make sure we are safe．We mustn't bring restricted knives or things to our school because these things may cause serious problems．（不带管制刀具到学校）Do not have a bath in rivers or ponds by ourselves without our parents permission．（不私自下河洗澡）And，we should be friendly to others so fighting is strongly banned．（不打架） Make sure that we should always pay attention to the traffic on our way to school or home．Furthermore，if we meet some emergency，we must call for help from the police or our teachers．（上学的路上注意安全，遇到紧急情况要报警）（高分句型）
In a word，following these safety rules above can make us live in peace．（高分句型）

点评 初中英语的作文，着重考察学生连词成句的能力，要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在对所出现的问题或是采取的措施描写中注意使用连词或是好的句式．对于中学作文的写作，尽量将所学的知识运用到作文中，写出富于变化、结构紧凑的文章，不要出现中式英文．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子进行默写，考试时就能写出准确地道的作文．