题目内容
11.在家庭里、在学校里、在社会中,只要我们从自身做起,我们的行为就可以为实现和谐社会(harmonious society)、实现伟大的中国梦(China Dream)到推进作用.你们学校的English Newsletter正在以"Doing Our Part(从自身做起)"为题举行征文活动,请根据下面表格提示的内容,用英语写一篇征文.| 行为 | 作用 | |
| 在家庭里 | (1)帮助父母做家务 (2)和父母多交流 | (1)让父母不太累 (2)… |
| 在学校里 | (1)认真学习 (2)和老师、同学友好相处 (3)… | (1)养成良好的学习习惯 (2)… (3)… |
| 在社会中 | (1)不乱扔垃圾 (2)… (3)… | (1)使环境美化 (2)… (3)… |
| 愿望:如果我们每个人… | ||
(2)必须包括所有相关信息,并作适当发挥;
(3)词数:100词左右(征文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);
(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等.
Doing Our PartWe have grown up and it's time for us to do something for our family,our school and society.
At home, .
分析 高分句型:
①We should try our best to built the harmonious society.我们应该努力建设和谐社会.句子中try one's best表示尽力,后面跟to引导的不定式短语.
②If all of us pay more attention to these small things,our society will be bore beautiful.如果我们大家都更加关注这些小事,我们的社会将变得更美丽.这里if引导一个条件状语从句,从句一般用一般现在时,主句用一般将来时.
解答 Doing Our Part
We have grown up and it's time for us to do something for our family and society.(引出话题)At school,we must study hard.In class,we must listen to the teacher carefully and take some notes when it is necessary.Study habits are very important.Therefore,we should develop good study habits in class.In our daily lives,we should tried our best to get along well with our teachers and classmates.At home,we should help our parents with housework and communicate with them more,So our parents will not be too tired and we can get along better with each other.We should not throw rubbish and smoke in public places.We should protect our hometown from being polluted.(在学校和家里的做法)We should try our best to built the harmonious society.(高分句型)If all of us pay more attention to these small things,our society will be bore beautiful.(高分句型)(愿望)
点评 这是一篇给材料作文.本文所给材料比较详细,我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来.动笔前要认真阅读材料,不可遗漏要点,并适当发挥.根据材料内容可知本文主要是一般现在时态,主语是第一人称,注意时态语的搭配及主谓一致问题.写作中适当使用连词,注意上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系.
| 现状 | 1.地球变脏、变暖; 2.动植物处于危险之中;3… |
| 原因 | 1.人口增长、车辆增多;2.砍伐森林、杀戮动物;3… |
| 建议 | 保护地球,从我做起; 1.不吃野生动物、不穿皮衣;2.积极宣传保护野生动物的重要性; 3.建立自然保护区;4… |
2.短文中不要出现具体的学校姓名和人名.
Save the earth
Our earth was healthy and beautiful in the past..
| 过去 | 1.生活贫困,房屋破旧 2.污染严重,垃圾遍地 3.交通不便,游客很少 |
| 现在 | 1.生活:住房宽敞、明亮;许多人有自己的汽车 2.环境:山更绿,水更清,天更蓝… 3.旅游:每年有成千上万来自世界各地的游客 |
| 将来 | 请你展望家乡的未来 |
In the past,my hometown was very small.People lived a poor life.The houses were old and small.
Pollution was very serious,and there was rubbish everywhere.The transportation was not convenient,so few
visitors came here.
Now great changes have taken place in my hometown.The environment has become much better.The
mountains have turned greener.The rivers are clearer and the sky is bluer.There are trees,flowers and grass
everywhere.People live a better life.Their houses are large and bright.Many people have their own cars.
Every year,thousands of people from all over the world come to visit our city.I'm sure my hometown will
become better and better in the future..
| Name | Housework |
| Wu Jun | Clean up rooms |
| Jia Mei | Help much cook dinner |
| Wang Ping | Wash clothes |
| I | … |
1汇报内容:你和你同学所做的家务活;你对做家务活的看法;
2 所写单词数在80个左右
3 汇报的开头和结尾已给出,不记入总词数.
Dear class,
Good morning!Now let me report the discussion work in our group.