Question

17．五月十五日是国际家庭日（International Day of Families），为了帮助同学们提高家庭观念和责任感，你校英文报刊正在以"Building a Happy Family（创建幸福家庭）"为题征文，请你写一篇短文投搞，谈谈家庭成员如何创建一个幸福的家庭．作为孩子，你通常是怎么做的，还需要在哪些方面改进．
提示词语：love，understand，help，respect．take care of，housework
提示问题：
What should family members do to build a happy family？
•As a child，what do you usually do？
What else do you need lo do？
A happy family is important for everyone．                                  ．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：And we always get along well with each other and understand each other，which，in my opinion，is important for us to build a happy family我们总是相处得很好，互相理解，这在我看来，这对我们建立一个幸福的家庭是很重要的．get along well with sb．是一个固定短语，意思是相处融洽．后面是一个由which引导的非限定性的定语从句，in one's opinion在某人看来．
高分句型二：Though he is busy with his work，he looks after the family quite well虽然他忙于工作，但他很照顾这个家庭．这是一个由though引导的让步状语从句，意思是尽管，虽然，be busy with sth．忙于…

解答 Building a Happy Family
       A happy family is important for everyone． There are three people in my family．They are my father，mother and I．We love each other．We are helpful and friendly．And we always get along well with each other and understand each other，which，in my opinion，is important for us to build a happy family（高分句型一）．（家庭成员怎样做才能建立幸福的家庭）
       I always do what I can to help my mother do housework，like doing some cleaning，washing clothes and cooking．My dad is an office worker．Though he is busy with his work，he looks after the family quite well（高分句型二）．So，I usually have a relaxing talk with him to make him feel relaxed．Besides，I study hard and do well in all the subjects so that my parents won't worry about me．（我对家人的爱及具体做法）
       I am happy I have a happy family．And I know I must become strong enough to take care of my family well in the future（对未来的期待及需要改进的地方）．

点评 在写作时，要尽量使用高分单词，短语和句子，句式，以便为文章增色．