Question

【题目】青少年是祖国的未来，也是城市的名片。在创建全国文明城市的过程中，我市举办了“美德少年”评选活动。假如你是“美德少年”的争创者，请根据下列表格中的提示，以“Be a virtue teenager, build a civilized city”为题，用英语写一份倡议书，号召大家积极争做“美德少年”，为港城添彩。

主题	做“美德少年”，创文明城市
内容	待人方面：尊老爱幼，友好互助 言谈方面：语言文明，耐心倾听 出行方面：遵守交规，主动礼让
你的观点	联系实际，谈谈你的观点(至少两点)

注意：1)、90词左右。短文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
2)、文中不得提及有关考生的个人的身份的任何信息，如: 校名，人名等。

Answer 1

【答案】Be a virtue teenager, build a civilized city

Being a teenager of Longkou, what should we do to help buid a civilized city? Firstly, when in public places, we should respect the elderly and take care of the young. We should also be friendly and helpful to others; Secondly, when having a conversation, we should speak politely and be patient enough to listen; Thirdly, when on the road, we should obey the traffic rules and give seats when necessary.

As junior students, I think it's our duty to do as the above. At the same time, we should try our best to study hard and obey all the school rules. In this way, we can be a virtue teenager and help to build our city into a civilized one. I hope everyone will join us and try to be a virtue teenager.

【解析】本文属于材料作文，写一份倡议书，号召大家做美德少年。根据要表达的内容确定并准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑，可适当增加内容。这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别适用一些亮点词句，如Firstly, Secondly, Thirdly, respect, be friendly to, necessary以及as等。增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。