Question

16．（A） 根据要求完成小作文，词数：30-40词左右．
要点如下：本周六是王洪的生日，许多同学将去她家参加生日聚会．王洪爱好广泛，为人友善；经常帮父母做家务．一些同学打算向父母要钱买礼物送给她．你对同学们花钱买礼物一事的看法及理由．
要求：不要逐字翻译．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于陈述正反方观点的议论文作文，主题是花钱为同学买礼物好不好．本题所给材料较为简略，故动笔前一定要认真阅读材料，根据材料内容确定人称，时态等问题．内容上应注意描述的全面性，语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯，适当使用连词，做到上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系．
高分句型：
①She often helps her parents with the housework．她经常帮着她父母做家务．help sb with sth帮着某人做某事．

②But I don't think it's a good idea，because that'll cost our parents'money．但是我认为这不是一个好主意，因为那要花我们父母的钱．句子中think后面跟的是一个宾语从句，because在句子中引导一个原因状语从句．

解答 Wang Hong is a friendly girl and has a lot of hobbies．She often helps her parents with the housework（高分句型）（介绍王洪的基本情况）．It's her birthday this Saturday．Many classmates will go to her home for her birthday party．Some of them will ask their parents for some money to buy her gifts（同学们将参加晚会并买一些礼物）．But I don't think it's a good idea，because that'll cost our parents'money（高分句型）．I'm going to make a birthday card for her by myself．I'm sure she'll like it．（我对此事的看法以及我的做法）

点评 做英语书面表达时，只要注意认真审题，分析体裁，确定时态；分析内容要点，列出一些基本词汇及词组；注意表达的条理性，用好连接词；为丰富文章的文采，可以多用一些复合句．最后，注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误．