Question

【题目】为了帮助中学生健康成长，某英文报开辟了Heart-to-heart专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中他向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日学习压力大，容易发脾气，觉得家庭、学校规则太多，与父母、老师、同学相处不好，常常要和他们争吵……使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。 内容要点如下： 1. 表示理解并给予安慰； 2. 提出建议并说明理由。
注意：1. 词数：80左右； 2. 信中不能出现与本人相关的信息； 3. 信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：have too much study pressure; be angry easily; too many rules; argue with……; be allowed to do; it's a good way to do……; communicate with; relax……
Hi Worried,
I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. Teenagers……
Yours,
Jamie

Answer 1

【答案】Hi Worried,

I'm sorry to know that you're having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be going wrong, so you don't have to worry much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything you'll regret. Here are three useful tips:

First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends as physical exercise is an effective way to get rid of anger. And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits.

I hope you'll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.

Yours,

Jamie

【解析】这是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求按照Worried写的求助信写一封回信，根据信中提到的困扰表示理解和安慰，并提出建议并给出理由。所以考生在写作的时候，要围绕来信的问题一一给与解答, 适当得拓展发挥，在写作的过程中，使用一些词汇和句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。注意人称，时态语态和常见的语法问题，同时在列举建议和理由的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。