题目内容
书面表达(共15分)
改革开放后,我们的生活正在发生日新月异的变化,请你以“My life in 20 years”为题,写一篇80词左右的文章,大胆设想你20年后的学习生活情况。文章开头已经给出,但不计入总数。
My life in 20 years
Now our life is different every day. I think life will be much better in 20 years.
My life in 20 years
Now our life is different every day. I think life will be much better in 20 years. We don’t need to go to school every day, we can study at home because teachers teach us on the internet. We won’t have tests any more. When we grow up, we can do what we like. Food is free and delicious, we can order it on the Internet and someone will send it to our homes. We don’t need to work. Robots will do everything for us. We can travel around the world as much as we want, but we don’t need to pay for it.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文要求我们发挥想象力,设想一下自己20年后的生活是什么样子的。题目中没有具体的内容要求,只给了我们这样一个命题,我们需要结合自己的实际情况,发挥想象,写出一篇作文来。既然是设想20年后的生活,20年后,我们的生活肯定会有很大的变化,我们可以从几个方面来阐述,如学习上,未来学生们可能会在自己的家里学习;再如我们的生活上,肯定会比现在更方便,更好;还有我们的交通方式,会比现在更安全、快捷,也更环保等等。这些内容我们可以用正确的英语表达出来,通过分析可知,这篇短文我们应该主要使用一般将来时,第一人称的形式。写作时,我们应多使用好的短语和句型,使文章表达流畅。
【亮点说明】这是一篇优秀的范文,短文中作者给我们设想了我们未来20年的生活会有什么样的变化。本文的作者主要是从以下几个方面来阐述的:首先是学习生活上的变化,I think life will be much better in 20 years. We don’t need to go to school every day, we can study at home because teachers teach us on the internet. We won’t have tests any more.,这里作者主要使用了宾语从句和原因状语从句;接下来是我们以后从事的工作,When we grow up, we can do what we like.;然后作者讲述了我们日常生活的变化,ood is free and delicious, we can order it on the Internet and someone will send it to our homes. We don’t need to work. Robots will do everything for us.。最后是旅行方式上的变化,We can travel around the world as much as we want, but we don’t need to pay for it.。整篇短文意思连贯,表达流畅、完整。
考点:话题类作文。