Question

【题目】假如你是张华，你推荐好朋友李明参加“最佳学生奖”的评选，请根据下面表格的内容，写一封推荐信。

个性	善良，乐于助人，……
能力	聪明，思维缜密；
事迹	1. 经常参加一些为贫困儿童募集衣服、书本的活动； 2. 上个月，一个七岁的男孩迷路，他帮助孩子找到了家； 3. 上周末，他从大火中救出一位老人。 4. 领养流浪狗（homeless dog），每天放学后带他散步，成为好朋友，帮他刷毛、洗澡、喂食；
希望	……

要求：语句通顺，条理清楚，不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥。字数不少于80字。

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I would like to recommend my friend Li Ming for the Best Student Award.

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Yours faithfully

Zhang Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I would like to recommend Li Ming for the Best Student Award. He is the best student in Class 1, Grade 7. First and foremost，he is very kind and always ready to help others. Besides, he is so smart that he is good at all his subjects. Most importantly, he always tries his best to help those in need. He often take part in meaningful activities such as raising clothes and books. Last week, he saw a boy at the age of seven lose his way and helped him get back home. Yesterday he saved an old man out of fire and saved his life. He even adopts some homeless dogs , walks with them , cleans them and feeds them so that they soon become good friends. If Li Ming can win the award, we will be happy. We hope to hear from you soon.

Yours

Paul

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇应用文写作，写一封信。给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。

写作亮点：本文行文流畅，语言规范。推荐理由充分，有理有据，层次清晰，段落分明，使用了很多句型和短语： “First and foremost，Besides, Most importantly,”“ Besides, he is so smart that he is good at all his subjects.”以及复合句“He even adopts some homeless dogs , walks with them , cleans them and feeds them so that they soon become good friends.”的使用，丰富了文章的内容，为文章增色不少。