题目内容
【题目】假如你叫李华,你和你美国朋友Betty经常通过邮件谈论各自的学习,她想了解你是如何练习英语口语的以便她学习汉语时借鉴。请你根据她的问题回复邮件。
提示词语:pronunciation, speak, classmate, retell
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【答案】
Hi! Betty,
I’m glad to hear from you. Now let me tell you something about my English study.
Once I was not good at English, I was afraid of speaking English in front of people because of my poor pronunciation. My English teacher, Miss Li, noticed my problem. She had a talk with me patiently and taught me how to learn English well. After that, I often read English aloud and retell it as much as I can. And talk with my classmates in English after class. On the weekend I go to an English club to improve my speaking skills. At the same time I often keep a diary in English and listen more English. Now I not only do well in English but also try to help others with their English when they are in trouble. I hope this can help you with your Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,主题为“英语口语练习”。动笔前要先认真阅读要点,尽量将提示的内容利用上;以提示的问题作为写作的主线,结合材料内容,可知本文主要是第一人称,一般过去时态进行叙述。语言的表述应该符合语法的结构,造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。适当使用连词,做到上下文联系紧密,符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点:本文紧扣材料,要点完整,表达清晰流畅。文中用到了很多短语,如:be good at ,be afraid of, not only…but also等等。此外,句子之间用了一些连词,使逻辑更紧密,如but,and, at the same time,等。另外时态运用非常准确,语言准确,语意连贯,表达清楚,没有任何语法错误。