Question

20．近年来，中小学生的健康问题日益引起人们的关注．请你以How to keep healthy 为题，写一篇80词左右的短文，谈谈你的看法和建议．
要求：主要包括以下内容，可以适当发挥．文章开头已给出，不计入总词数．
1．列举中小学生面临的健康问题，如go to school without breakfast，play computer games，watch TV，drink or smoke，
2．提出保持健康的合理建议；
3．发表自己的看法．
How to Keep Healthy
Everyone needs to keep healthy today，especially we students．But we don't know the importance of keeping healthy．                                          

Answer 1

分析 【高分句型一】
Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke许多男孩认为喝酒抽烟很酷．
think后是省略了that的宾语从句．
【高分句型二】
It is important for us to have good habits对于我们有好习惯是重要的．
it's+adj+for sb+to do sth 对于我来说做某事是怎样的．

解答 How to Keep Healthy
Everyone needs to keep healthy today，especially we students，But we don't know the importance of keeping healthy．Some of us go to school without breakfast in the morning．Some students play computer games or watch TV all day，especially on the weekend．Many boys think it is cool to drink or smoke【高分句型一】．（面临的健康问题）
It is important for us to have good habits【高分句型二】．We should have breakfast every morning．We can watch TV or play computer games for a short time，and then have a rest．We can also join some sports clubs．（合理建议）
1 think it is necessary for us to keep healthy．（看法）

点评 写作要抓住要点．要在"准"字上下功夫．在写作中注意人称与谓语动词的数关系和动词时态等诸多方面．在平时的练习中，注意多背诵范文，对于写的好的句子要进行默写，这样在写作时就能写出准确地道的作文．