Question

【题目】根据提示,写一篇80词左右的短文。必须用上提示的单词。

世界迈入智能时代，未来的生活是什么样的？请你想象一下。

单词提示: flight car(飞行汽车)，soft screens(柔性视屏), submarine city(海底城市)

Answer 1

【答案】The Life in the Future

What do you think the life in the future will be like? Every family will have computers and robots. Computers will help us know a lot all over the world. Robots will help us do most of the housework. When we go out to work, we can take a flight car, which greatly relieves the traffic pressure. The use of soft screens better protects children's vision. In the future, people can live in submarine cities. People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care.

Our life will be better and better. For this, we should study hard and realize our dreams.

【解析】

这是一篇话题作文，根据材料中的相关信息介绍一下未来的生活是什么样的？主要从flight car(飞行汽车)，soft screens(柔性视屏)，submarine city(海底城市)，这三个方面去介绍。时态为一般将来时。注意作文中必须包含提示的单词，并适当发挥。写作时，避免使用汉语式的英语，尽量使用我们熟悉的句子或短语。语法要正确，表达要符合英语习惯，注意时态、时间状语的搭配及主谓一致问题。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系，表达具有条理性。

【高分句型一】

When we go out to work, we can take a flight car, which greatly relieves the traffic pressure. 当我们外出工作时，我们可以乘飞行汽车，这大大减轻了交通压力。

句子When we go out to work,是由when引导的时间状语从句。

【高分句型二】

People will live to be 200 years old because of the better medical care.

由于更好的医疗保健，人们将活到200岁。

because of the better medical care. 由于更好的医疗保健。